Ralph was quiet. I wasn’t speaking either. There was nothing to talk about after all. Nothing happened last night. I wowalked up to me and I peered up at him he spoke,
“Piggy? Are you the only one left?”
I replied. The conversation continued. We talked a bit about, Simon and we established that it was an accident and none of us were there. Then we also talked a bit about the fire then Sam and Eric walked up to us. I suddered at all the mentionings of Simon and the party last night at Jacks. But in the end we all established that we went to sleep early because we were tired.
Late in the next day after I lost my glasses. I could hardly see anything because I had horrible eye sight. I tried to stifle a cry as I stubbed my toe on a logs edge. Ralph attempted to gesticulate his sympathy to me, it didn’t matter I was already blind. I was smothered by my misfortune. But then I looked up even though I ould hardly see, the sun was there, as bright as ever. It was hope, and a ball of phosphorescence which was the only shield against the beast.
“Piggy? Are you the only one left?”
I replied. The conversation continued. We talked a bit about, Simon and we established that it was an accident and none of us were there. Then we also talked a bit about the fire then Sam and Eric walked up to us. I suddered at all the mentionings of Simon and the party last night at Jacks. But in the end we all established that we went to sleep early because we were tired.
Late in the next day after I lost my glasses. I could hardly see anything because I had horrible eye sight. I tried to stifle a cry as I stubbed my toe on a logs edge. Ralph attempted to gesticulate his sympathy to me, it didn’t matter I was already blind. I was smothered by my misfortune. But then I looked up even though I ould hardly see, the sun was there, as bright as ever. It was hope, and a ball of phosphorescence which was the only shield against the beast.
2 comments:
Don't you need more words?
Well other than that:
I tried to stifle a cry as I stubbed my toe on a logs edge.
You used the vocab word really well.
Tisk Tisk Tisk...... more mistakes Its a great blog though I just think you need to check over your writing........ I really like it when you say:
Ralph attempted to gesticulate his sympathy to me, it didn’t matter I was already blind.
Comment: I liked it because it shows piggy's feelings really well..... Well done Leyla! =D
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