Lord of the flies: The Castle Rock #10

Thursday, February 28, 2008

The Castle Rock #10

Sam and Eric layed there helplessly. Tied up, Roger was advancing on them with a large cub like stick. It seemed like it had been a long time ago when they were both on the beach with Piggy and Ralph discussing what they should next about Piggies glasses getting stolen. Sam eyes widened when Roger raised the club. YES he should join Jacks tribe, he wasn't going to be tortured. Then images of Piggy being crushed by the rock swept past his mind. NO Jack was cruel and he would resist. Eric was wimpering... when the club made contact with his back it hurt bad, his eyes watered. He wanted to scream, fine ill join you! Then he looked past Rogers shoulder and saw the ledge which he used to push off the rock. He closed his eyes as another unbearible blow hit his shoulder. Then Piggy Flashed through his mind, Simons screams echoed through his mind, and the first day played back. He wished they never came here, he wished Piggy didn't die. Eric felt so helpless.

Both the twins sreamed for mearcy as ROger unleashed his worst blows yet. Both were ashamed on failing Ralph, he was probubly worried about them. But he had more to worry about then Sam and Eric.

2 comments:

Karen said...: Don't you need more words?

I like this part in your blog,
Then images of Piggy being crushed by the rock swept past his mind."

I like that sentence, i would feel like that?

GOOD JOB LEYLA!; March 3, 2008 at 6:13 PM
Virginia said...: I really liked this sentence of yours :

But he had more to worry about then Sam and Eric.

It forshaddowed that somthing bad was going to happen but again tiny mistakes...... like:
Piggies

Should be
Piggy's

Great job though it really pulled me in as a reader.; March 4, 2008 at 8:32 PM

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Lord of the Flies (back) by William Golding, my version of summary

This is about a group of British school boys who are stuck on an island. These boys are faced with the challenge of maintaining the society that they came from and not giving into the instinct of the beast. The head of the group is a boy named Ralph. He is one of the older ones so he must try and keep some sort of organization. But another older boy who is called Jack has other plans. He is the one who causes trouble and side tracks the group from the main goal which is being rescued from the tiny island. Jack and Ralph get along at first, but eventually they begin to disagree. Jack especially hates a boy named Piggy, which Ralph tries to defend. To find out more read the novel LORD OF THE FLIES, there are many editions so the covers mayy look different! :)

The Beast (AKA the beastie)

The beast (or beastie) is the true human instict or in other words the bad side of humans. Not literarlly but the beast may not even be real. Sure Sam and Eric saw it and so did the little kids (littleuns) but it may actually be something else. In the pig hunting chapter about a week after the bos arrive at the island Jack is hunting (as usual) and he mentions like he feels somthing is watching him. The beastie? Or perhapes something else... It also may be his fellow hunters who loyaly follow behind him. But then there is something else, the human instict to kill. Maybe he feels like he is turn uncivilized and turning wild! Who knows well only find out later on in the book.